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The Dark Side

Contributed by GREAT-WHITE on Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 05:26:31 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I feel like my whole life i've been blacked out.
They feed me cheep shots and want me to tap out.
But I wont.
These give me stress so I choke myself out.
While my minds going wild like a crack house.
The skys a elephant and im the scary mouse.
While lifes irelavent.
Im intelligent.
My girl might think im ignorant.
Im tiered of it.
I need to get a new life with the same wife.
With the same great name im known as great white.
Staying up all night because thats when my minds out of the light.
I think of to much stuff.
Im trying to put my thoughts in order but its never enough.
Lifes rough so im tough but I build my stress up.
On top of the building screaming about my feelings wanting to give up but I lash out.
Sometimes I cry on my walks cause people talk now im ready to cash out.
Gonna start bringing pain with zombie thoughts I will eat your brains.
Take a picture message sent.
Sorry that was evil waking up killin villians defending millions.
Even the ones that are hooked on sinning.
We all need love one love no thugs.
They dont care shoulder shrugs.
If so shotgun slugs to the lungs.
Dont see love from above.
Only evil from below.
21 years old always been told lies like were some small fries life blows.
bomb vest in a packed house I am ready to blow.
They told me I cant live FREE so I shot them in the blow hole.
Im doin this stuff solo with a cold flow.
While there worried about colors and giving low blows.
Your worried about the set you claim.
Forget gangs im from the freeside GREAT WHITES my name.

Copyright © GREAT-WHITE ... [ 2011-11-29 17:26:31]
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Re: The Dark Side (User Rating: 1 )
by krissy26 on Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 07:03:01 PM AEST
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sounds sorta like a rap lol sorry but i like it

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