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:No More:
Contributed by
DeLeriousTearZ
on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Emotions playing me constantly
Tears running endlessly
Depression growing enourmously
MY BODY CAN'T HANDLE IT ANYMORE
Mind spinning continuously
Outbursts sporatically
Muscles tensed Regularly
MY BODY CAN'T HANDLE IT ANYMORE
Heart beats rapidly
Blacking out daily
Senses disappear occasionaly
MY BODY CAN'T HANDLE IT ANY MORE
Lungs struggle for air softly
Eyes shut slowly
Blood seeps out calmly
MY BODY DOESN'T HAVE TO HANDLE IT ANYMORE
Copyright ©
DeLeriousTearZ
... [
2003-05-02 11:05:00]
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Re: :No More:
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 02:40:10 PM AEST
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I liked this a lot. I loved the repetition and how it changed at the last line. What u have described I feel like that alot. Hope to see more from you hang in there.
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Re: :No More:
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 05:32:53 PM AEST
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Apart from the blacking out, i too feel like that a lot. Good write.
x_x_x |
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Re: :No More:
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by kegs04 on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 11:41:37 PM AEST
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yes yes i have, wonderful write I liked this one a lot
peace* kegs |
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