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4am
Contributed by
cutestmofo
on
Saturday, 26th November 2011 @ 01:37:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Pain consumes me
I hear my heart beating in my chest
Swallowing my soul
My body feels strange
Cold
Surreal
I wipe my tears but there’s nothing there
Even my shadow deserts me
An empty shell
Distant
Unfair
Darkness creeps beside me
Saying am weak...breaking my will
Emptying me strength
Detached
Broken
Ground moving beneath me, but am the only one who feels it
Curled up like a child
Begging for better
Crying
Alone
My screen seems to disappear
My fingers writing on their own
Darkness looms
Suffering
Dead
Copyright ©
cutestmofo
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2011-11-26 01:37:06]
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Re: 4am
(User Rating: 1 )
by krissy26 on
Saturday, 26th November 2011 @ 05:39:30 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem, though a few mistakes maybe unless that's how you wanted it, but in all a great read. |
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Re: 4am
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by Ellewood on
Saturday, 26th November 2011 @ 06:32:05 AM AEST
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| Your pain is very apparent in your poetry...I am sorry . It is beautifully written. |
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