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When a smile is a cry
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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When a smile is a cry, a laugh is a scream
When black clouds and dark rain block every sunbeam
When noise is too much to bear
When your mind is your haven, your secret lair
When a tear is a formality
When fear is normality
When the crimson isn’t deep enough
When the cold isn’t cold enough
When the pain isn’t hurtful enough
When all is too tough
When those you love don’t love you back
When the reflection in the mirror is beginning to crack
When seeing red is your way to see the light
When falling asleep is a struggle, a fight
When everything’s dead inside
When there’s only ever a low tide
When running, fleeing, means getting too near
When too many voices means you can’t hear
When the grass is just as black over there
When you can’t face life, you don’t dare
When the hole gets wider and deeper the further you fall
When you know the only way to make them see you is to not be there at all
When your own self is too difficult to comprehend
You know all you’ve got to look forward to is the end...
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Re: When a smile is a cry
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by Silent-Cry on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 02:33:10 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful,so magical but yet so real... i loved it!
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Re: When a smile is a cry
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 03:01:02 PM AEST
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Very well written I loved this immensely I can see where you are coming from the lines:
When fear is normality
When seeing red is your way to see the light
Really spoke to me thumbs up
Bobo (Joel)
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Re: When a smile is a cry
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by Funnygrl_03 on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 05:24:28 PM AEST
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| that was a good poem ur a great writer |
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Re: When a smile is a cry
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by Delusions on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 07:19:52 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem... keep it up!!! ~Delusions~ |
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Re: When a smile is a cry
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by BlackFire9786 on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:47:41 PM AEST
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| wow, great poem, i know exactly how it is, feeling that the best thing that could happen to you was the end, you're a great writer, keep it up! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: When a smile is a cry
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by Daydreamer on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 03:15:40 PM AEST
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| This was a good write...It is so true...It is sad how things can't always be so wonderful and peachy, how things have to have a few thorns to make it a natural rose. ~Day~ |
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