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Behind the brown eyes
Contributed by
Ellewood
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Friday, 25th November 2011 @ 02:49:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I look into his brown eyes
he often will try to disguise
his sorrow and pain
and although he tries to refrain
I see could see right through him
I will give him kindness and love
for he was sent to me from up above
his big strong arms when they hug me
I truly only want him to see
that I could love him like no other
it is true love that he will discover
I want his brown eyes to show
only love not pain
and this I will help him gain
through my love and hugs
and many kisses
for him these are my wishes.
Copyright ©
Ellewood
... [
2011-11-25 14:49:11]
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Re: Behind the brown eyes
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 25th November 2011 @ 03:16:10 PM AEST
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| What a lovely write! It shows the path of love. I liked it. Thank you |
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Re: Behind the brown eyes
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 25th November 2011 @ 03:41:29 PM AEST
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| i like the poem, it reminded of me how i love a guy. it was awesome. i hope you write more. keep writing. i can relate to this poem. |
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Re: Behind the brown eyes
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by Anbarean on
Friday, 25th November 2011 @ 09:13:51 PM AEST
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| Wonderful dear love it :) |
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Re: Behind the brown eyes
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by FFRW99 on
Monday, 28th November 2011 @ 08:52:31 PM AEST
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| I can feel your love and concern for the person and how much you are in love with them. I just love this, I hope to see more, great Poetry thanks. |
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