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'Hey Pretty'

Contributed by Syncoplesque on Thursday, 24th November 2011 @ 04:18:29 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Hey pretty, would you
Mind if I showed you my love?
Would you mind if I dragged
You around just a little while
And showed you my world?
I know you're high on that pedestal
That all the little boys put you on
But I'll tell you right now
That I'm the only one that can
Give you what you need.
Hey pretty, come and take
A ride on my side of town.
I'll show you all you need to be
Convinced that I'm the one you
Want around now.
Hey pretty, would you mind
If I showed you my love?
It'll take the night but I think
You'll like the results.
I know you're high on that pedestal
That all the little boys put you on
But I'll tell you now that I'm the
Only one that can give you what
You need.
Pretty, come and take a ride with me.
You're so pretty, won't you come
And take a ride on my side of town?
I'll show you all you need to know
I'm the only one you need around now.

Copyright © Syncoplesque ... [ 2011-11-24 16:18:29]
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Re: 'Hey Pretty' (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Sunday, 27th November 2011 @ 04:31:34 PM AEST
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Very nicely done! There are people out there
who don't see exactly what's best for them
until someone takes a peg or two from their
pedestals.

Blessings,
Rob

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