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Crying Star
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Tuesday, 22nd November 2011 @ 09:22:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The first defeat
The first taste of flesh
Fingers, lips, and heart
Crying star
The first fear of love
Gentle hush
Imposing nudge
The first cry of pain
You are a river
A drowning circumstance
Small hands for laughter
A smile to make me
Sing
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2011-11-22 21:22:04]
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Re: Crying Star
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2011 @ 10:25:02 PM AEST
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| Things that make ya' go hmmmm... I'd say Crying Star is one of them. |
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Re: Crying Star
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by ming on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2011 @ 09:50:34 PM AEST
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and this senence...
'You are a river
A drowning circumstance'
wowed me!
ming
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