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the sea
Contributed by
LittleMissAnonymous
on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2011 @ 07:52:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The sea is a
Silk blanket,
Soft and soothing.
Its azure color emphasized
By the fine white sand.
Waves like little wrinkles
On a sheet.
A beautiful fabric made
Not by man
But by nature.
Its borders lined up wih smooth rocks.
Unique shells wash up on
The shores,
And come in many different hues.
As well as the fish
That very in shapes
And sizes.
Copyright ©
LittleMissAnonymous
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2011-11-22 19:52:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the sea
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2011 @ 03:26:41 PM AEST (User
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Quite nice, a wonderful extended metaphor. |
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