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First love
Contributed by
ravi
on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I still remember that golden day,
in that hot,blistering month of May,
Getting permission after lots of strive,
we had speedily gone on a long lonely drive.
Like the adventurous wild seas,
lashing at a quiet,innocent beach,
the bubbling ferocious excitement,
had broken our very powers of speech.
The vibrant,colourful birds around,
campaigned loud to get our vote,
we were just too engrossed,
to take the faintest of note.
Words seemed too petty to say anything,
our talking eyes explained everything.
Love is indeed too strange,
thoughts became our medium of exchange.
Our hearts had skipped many a beat,
we had long forgotton to unpack and eat.
Like a surging,furious volcano of water,
breaking through strong,rugged dams,
we had suddenly,simultaneously flooded,
into each other's loving arms.
The rest that happened is too blurred to list,
the world had vanished and drowned,
into passionate globules of mist.
Time may keep on flying like a dove,
I am yet to forget; my first love.
Copyright ©
ravi
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2003-05-02 06:05:00]
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Re: First love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 07:14:51 AM AEST
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Ahhh...the unforgettable 'first love'... wonderful write, Ravi....enjoyed it...
Jenni |
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Re: First love
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 08:05:57 AM AEST
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very beautiful write
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Re: First love
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:20:50 AM AEST
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Ravi you captured your emotions well in this poem.
This is beautiful. I really enjoy your work!!
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Re: First love
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by Ravi on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 11:01:57 AM AEST
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| Thanx Jenni.As you have rightly said, "first love " is unforgettable. |
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Re: First love
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by Ruzel on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2011 @ 04:38:57 AM AEST
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| A really nice poem. I was impressed. First love is always unforgettable |
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