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Paper dreams
Contributed by
lowman613
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Sunday, 20th November 2011 @ 08:17:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I write my dreams on paper, maybe a sentence or two,
hoping someone would see my dreams,
and make them some day come true,
But my dreams are just writen words,
on a peice of paper thats blank white,
no one has ever heard the dreams I dream at night,
I write them down so I would not forget,
the dreams I have in my head,
but they're just fantasies that I have while sleeping in my bed,
Things I wish upon to one day happen to me,
hopes,dreams, wishes are really just a fantasy,
If you want your dreams to come alive, you have to make it so,
not just write them on paper to toss away & let go,
You have to make them happen instead of hiding them inside,
if they don't come true,at least you know you've tried,
I know there are others that had dreams come true,
don't get me wrong some of mine have often too,
Dreams on paper for the world to see,
I think for now I'll keep them inside me,
So don't be afraid to dream or think big,
because dreaming is not just for kids!
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2011-11-20 20:17:58]
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Re: Paper dreams
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th November 2011 @ 09:57:36 PM AEST
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Welcome back home girl.
So good to see something new from you.
This one is a Masterpeice.
It gets kindda lonely around here with very few of us oldies.
Luv , big huggs, smiles, blessings, dreams,
emy |
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Re: Paper dreams
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by Banda5k1 on
Monday, 21st November 2011 @ 12:29:32 AM AEST
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| It's alright but kind of a bit of a cliche. |
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Re: Paper dreams
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Wednesday, 18th January 2012 @ 08:14:31 PM AEST
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Hello ole friend! Good to hear your words flowing
again. Missed you. Hope you are off to a very happy new year. This is a very good write.
I enjoyed it.
Blessings, Robert Edgar Burns
To my good friends like you, I'm
just plain ole Rob |
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