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Torn in Two.
Contributed by
0o_Jelly_Bean_o0
on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
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My arms are outstretched,
They've taken their sides,
I'm begginning to be torn in two.
I never wanted to have to choose,
But its like they dont even know,
Its them who is making me feel this way.
They both say i love you,
I know i want to say it back,
I know i'd mean it,
To both.
They say its alright,
That they dont mind,
But they are pulling me in two.
I scream out hey it doesnt have to be this way,
But still my arms are outstretched,
I'm being torn in two.
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Re: Torn in Two.
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:13:32 AM AEST
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| quite the ouchy position...... well done poem, i wasn't sure what i was expecting with your title, but i am happy to have read this:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Torn in Two.
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by JamesHowlett on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:38:20 AM AEST
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| I like this poem...I can relate to the feeling. good job. |
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Re: Torn in Two.
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by shelby on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:50:52 AM AEST
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Oh I wouldn't want to be in this position. Great poem. I hope that you get things worked out!!
Michelle |
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Re: Torn in Two.
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by Apartment213 on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 05:08:29 AM AEST
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| great poem but im glad im not in that postion but very good none the less |
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Re: Torn in Two.
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by PhantomsLDY on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 03:17:21 AM AEST
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| This is a really good poem about being stuck in a very sticky situation and not being anle to find your way out. Great write. |
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Re: Torn in Two.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 07:28:07 AM AEST
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| i'm sorry i am one of those ppl that makes you feel that way....i wont say anymore on here.But it makes me feel so bad that you feel that way.And i'm sorry.(its a great poem though!!!) |
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Re: Torn in Two.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 12:50:55 AM AEST
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| i take back that last comment.I'm not sorry for anything.Its your own fault you felt that way because you were two timing us (little did i know at the time though or i wouldda dumped your ass) |
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