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Dogwood
Contributed by
exiled
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Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This time she has been crucified,
she was blind leading the blind.
Everyone she loves is dead,
she has nothing left.
Candles burning in the dark,
the dim light and flickering fire
tears her soul apart.
Empty tears fall from her eyes,
as she reaches to the stars to open the skies.
Only to find she's searching for something
which can't be found.
Yet, she's hoping shes not so sick.
She will die.
This time she's been crucified.
Her beauty now corrodes,
along with her faith.
Pictures of loves lost past begin to shake,
and her memories begin to break.
her lipsmove,
but no one hears what she's saying.
so corrupted, so betrayed, she's dieing.
Virgin, love once pure, snow white
now cold and empty.
He watched in the shadows,
with eyes of burning desire,
as he ripped away her purity.
she know kneels at her bed,
tears and mascara falling from her eyes.
The image of a cross upon her wall,
burns an image into her mind and between her thighs.
As she wraps the wire around her milk white wrists, and takes her own life.
She takes my hand and says theres nothing to fear.
The dogwoods are now bare for her pain.
As he sits in the shadows watching it all,
and begins to grin.
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exiled
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2003-05-01 22:45:00]
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Re: Dogwood
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 12:05:23 AM AEST
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| this is wicked dark and he has such a black heart... an excellent write... i'm somewhat unsure of the ending.... or unsure of where this is leading... makes me really want to see the rest of the series, i'm hooked lol, more please:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Dogwood
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by cryingonmyporch on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 12:57:55 AM AEST
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I loved it no other way to put!
Amy |
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Re: Dogwood
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by boobies on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 01:31:45 AM AEST
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| ah! you've created brilliance in words! wonderfully written. |
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Re: Dogwood
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by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:17:54 AM AEST
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wow sam, brilliant and beautiful...there are no other words...i loved it... :O) see you around
Lindsey |
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Re: Dogwood
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by razorbladerose on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 07:43:12 AM AEST
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This gave me shivers at the end! Very mind working....I do think i understand somewhat of what the meaning is, and
i also think it's great how you have like a series thing hapening with these writes! I can't wait till the rest comes along! Keep me posted!I loved it! |
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