Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 09:29:10 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

freedom

Contributed by hetlerkh on Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 05:01:12 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

while enjoying your cup of coffee n nothing to ruin that
while enjoying your dinner n getting fat
u don't give a ***** whats happening outside your window
u don't care for this or that
u don't even respect those people dying , n lift up your hat
sleeping in the day , waking up in the night
being such a bat
just to blind your eyes , n not see whats happening outside your flat
digging your head in between pillows to not hear the gun's whiz
if asking for air to breath is not a right , then to asking for freedom neither is
this is not a conflict nor a quiz
killer is a killer
victim is a victim
we all know whats going on
people poisoned
n lifes gone
no need to discuss
no need to moan
just come on
rise up from your grave
wake up from your sleep
my life i shall not keep
no one is spared ... even donkeys and sheep
children, elders , even animals they wont keep ..
a house of a brother is everyday blown
no mercy no forgiveness ,,
torture n pain to the bone
don't follow the horde
don't be one of many clones
rise up alone ! on your own and you'll reach out ..
grow up some dignity
everyone knows , and everything is well known
have some empathy grown
the past of the killer is well known
the blood and the smell of the dead ,, from far far ago , floods upon his throne
yet to deny u still
just have some respect for the martyrs shown ..
snap outta of your fear zone
stand up for the right side
and rise up your tone
and for victory or heaven together we shall be flown

Copyright © hetlerkh ... [ 2011-11-10 17:01:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 06:54:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I came in here planning on using my generic it's good comment, but I actually liked this a good bit. I did I did.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com