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Broken Halos
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 10:59:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I got this feeling
there's something wrong
you don't text me
you don't call,
there's no tenderness
there's no love
only sensations of deceptions flow,
what happened
to my
heaven....
Now you are saying you need time alone
I'm starting to think
you don't want me no more,
when I ask you if there's something wrong
your halo changes colors
and loses it's glow,
it's a sin
whats happening...
With the forsaken
I now fall
my angel wings are broken
they work no more,
serenity is shattered
there is no love
demons dance and laugh
as they take control,
oh what happened
to my
heaven...
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unknown_utopia
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2011-11-10 10:59:33]
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Re: Broken Halos
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by duff on
Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 01:49:16 PM AEST
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One day everything is good and you take sanctuary with this person that you care deeply for but how quickly that can change...the world has flipped and all you can do is roll with it which is the most difficult thing to do...This was stimulating and your lines had a ton of emotion...awesome job
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Re: Broken Halos
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 05:37:51 PM AEST
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Beautiful but sad.
I pray you find your halo once again.
I can certainly relate.
huggs, blessings, prayer,
emy
I know you're not talkin bout me cause I never had your digits.
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Re: Broken Halos
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 09:11:58 PM AEST
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so sad... it always is when someone just forgets us, just
goes their merry way with us left behind, i really loved how
you wrote this, its so moving,
hugs n' love nessa |
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