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Serotonin
Contributed by
duff
on
Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 08:25:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Entities approaching supersonic
Multiple subjects infiltrating vessel
Shift peripheral vision to hyper mode
Engaged communication under attack
Protect and seek paramount priority
Frenetic scenes inside the mainframe
Defense affairs have been breached
Immediately dispatch isolation units
Emergency reboot of user executed
Systematic damages minimized sir
Copyright ©
duff
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2011-11-10 08:25:37]
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Re: Serotonin
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 11:05:51 AM AEST
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ahh serotonin
don't if I should laugh or cry,
like the
off balance of this one
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Re: Serotonin
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 06:57:12 PM AEST
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Serotonin
I am depleted
^_^
keep writing |
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Re: Serotonin
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by UNORTHODOX on
Sunday, 29th July 2012 @ 12:17:35 PM AEST
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Nothing short of brilliant.
It takes pure genius to maintain,
in such depth; this train of thought.
The metaphors here are immense.
Simply intellectual benevolence.
In that we all get a glimpse,
into a truly gifted-artistic mind.
-UNORTHODOX |
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