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Love Lost
Contributed by
SDeezy17
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Wednesday, 9th November 2011 @ 11:21:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Your not with me anymore and I don't know what to do,
I'm so down your gone, not even a smurf could be this blue,
Not telling you how I felt from the beginning is the only thing I rue,
I tried to show you my love but it's like you didn't have a clue,
I'm love sick and I'm always hoping its just the flu,
My hearts broken and you took every last piece,
All I do is think about you therefore I'm never at peace,
Every time I told you I loved you, you laughed, just know I meant it,
I let you go my life is terrible and I regret it,
My mind tries to forget you, but my heart just won't let it,
Our love is sacred and I'll always defend it,
Love is forever you can't just go out and rent it,
My heart is torn and you did much more than bend it,
To get your one angel you must defeat all your demons,
Even in the darkest hours I could see you gleaming,
The only time I see you know is when I'm dreaming,
No words could describe just how I'm feeling,
Without you I feel absolutely lost,
I realized how much I loved you after you left, it wasn't worth the cost,
I catch myself thinking of you every night,
I need you here to make my day bright,
Understand that your the light to my darkness and the soul to my life,
I'm fighting the hurt, but seem to always end up bruised,
I'm hurting, I've done much more than pay my dues,
People tell me to give up, but I kindly refuse,
Your the wings to my guardian angel and the laces to my shoes,
In my arms is where you are supposed to be,
I know we'll end up together, it's our destiny.
Copyright ©
SDeezy17
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2011-11-09 23:21:32]
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Re: Love Lost
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 02:04:52 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Well u r already a pro with talent on loan from God.
Your writing just flows smoothly even in your pain.
Keep the faith and burn up that pen.
Huggs, blessings,
emy
I've been writing poetry since 1979 and I know a pro when I see one.
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Re: Love Lost
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th December 2011 @ 12:31:22 AM AEST
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by hoist1atca on Saturday, December 24 2011 @ 22:50:32 AEST
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very nice write
i truly like the last line
i believe that fate is the road that life gives us to travel
and that destiny is the path which we choose
some say **time heals all**
I, like you , still wait for that day
I wish you luck in getting your soul mate back
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