|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Brave.
Contributed by
0o_Jelly_Bean_o0
on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Sometimes it seems so surreal,
Sometimes I cannot beleive just how much I feel,
I started to drown into a big black sea,
But not once has she let my life slip away from me.
She sat by my bed and stroked my hair,
Told me it was alright, she'd never leave,
She'd always be there.
There were times she cried,
Admitted she was wrong,
I keep saying to her,
It's alright you tried,
You were so strong.
We're all allowed to cry,
In our own little ways,
To be sad or angry or happy some days.
If I start to sink down into that sea,
I know for sure she'll be there for me,
And that I am thankful for,
In so many ways,
You saved me beautiful girl,
You were the one being brave.
Copyright ©
0o_Jelly_Bean_o0
... [
2003-05-01 18:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Brave.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 07:33:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I like this poem just the way it is...
Shari |
|
|
Re: Brave.
(User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 07:55:43 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| THis is a very pretty poem the way it is....it sounds as if you have a true friend there. |
|
|
Re: Brave.
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 11:27:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
when I read this poem It really touched me it made me feel like I was drowning drowning in a pool of emotions I was like wow this is so deep I am drowning I couldn't really express in english words how this touched me and affected my life it's such a great way to look at things the perspective is so unique it made me drown drown because it was so deep (thats a double meaning)
AMY HOPPER |
|
|
Re: Brave.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 05:18:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| powerful words sounds like a strong bond |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
