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Winter Fire
Contributed by
duff
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Tuesday, 8th November 2011 @ 03:51:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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A storm taps the window
Partner flame with a fist
Lightning shocks marrow
Warmth tumbles finesse
Visions spy the sparrow
Too tied up to be missed
Let urge be your pharaoh
Soothe its pain with bliss
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duff
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2011-11-08 03:51:40]
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Re: Winter Fire
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by FlintHunter on
Tuesday, 8th November 2011 @ 04:02:58 AM AEST
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'Winter Fire' is a powerful poem. Although about half of its message eludes me, i love its sound, its meter, its tone. My absolute favorite line is 'Let urge be your pharaoh.' Thanks for another great poem. [Hope all pain goes away.] -- David
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Re: Winter Fire
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 11th November 2011 @ 12:08:13 AM AEST
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| I love how each line is an action within a description, creating a metaphor for a feeling or a concept. Your poetry truly is unique and also beautiful. |
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Re: Winter Fire
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 12:34:20 AM AEST
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exactly, hugs n' love nessa
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