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The Nightmares That Keeps Me From Dreaming
Contributed by
cheetham
on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I need someone to love me,
And to let me know I'm needed.
All I've felt from you,
As that hate is being seeded.
Every day is the same as yesterday,
And I'd rather not even be,
Than live another day as the figure,
Staring back from the mirror at me.
Every step I make is a fresh mistake,
So I turn around but it feels a lie.
I simply stop making footprints,
But then time just passes me by.
I lie here and think,
What to do next and where to go.
But I cant live my life anymore,
Going so god damn slow.
I'll expose you for what you are,
A thief and a liar and a cheat.
It feels that you set out,
To make everyday a deadbeat .
It's hard to feel optimistic,
When the glass is always half empty.
It makes me sick to think,
I've got to work to put bread on the floor.
I tire of those that interfere.
Who look at my life and sneer.
These delisious thoughts keep me awake,
With a constant sickness I cannot shake.
Your company fills me with lonelyness,
I wish this world was painless.
Copyright ©
cheetham
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2003-05-01 16:05:00]
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Re: The Nightmares That Keeps Me From Dreaming
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 06:08:08 PM AEST
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| hmm.. i 'm wishing you some happy pleasant dreams, nicely laid out poem:) welcome to ypdc, will look from more from you:) hugs nessa |
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Re: The Nightmares That Keeps Me From Dreaming
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by shelby on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:30:37 PM AEST
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I too wish for you only happy dreams and happy days. This poem is very sad but well written. Welcome too ypdc I will be watching for you!!
Michelle |
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Re: The Nightmares That Keeps Me From Dreaming
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by spooky on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:33:53 PM AEST
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| close your eye's and think of something pleasent,,a place,,a thing that made you happy,,just dream,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: The Nightmares That Keeps Me From Dreaming
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 09:58:28 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc... sad write, but it's nicely done.. I'm hoping things get better for you..
Jenni |
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Re: The Nightmares That Keeps Me From Dreaming
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 03:13:51 PM AEST
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| oh...one day, it'll be ok...and all those people won't matter...this is a really good poem, i especially like the third and last stanza...infact i like it all... |
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