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empress
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 10:23:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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mist
no-color-grey
eyes
fade
in'wards'
on
more
than one
way
to
get almost
anywhere
never
left my
pen
truer
pay-attention
words
squaw-mint
and
musk
spirit
of land
grace
of
life clean
woods
and
silent nights
She
may
abhor a
vacuum
but
she cleans
Her
own
with
might!
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-11-07 10:23:29]
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Re: empress
(User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 02:02:04 PM AEST
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| 'empress,' i can't help saying, 'impresses' me as a superb poem. Enigmatic -- as always -- this time, with threads that seem gray -- until the end -- where it seems we are suddenly woven with an unexpected red. There is no 'vacuum' here; the poem is filled with -- well, things ming -- engrossing All -- and full -- of life. --David |
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Re: empress
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by duff on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 02:24:27 PM AEST
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I love your style Ming...It truly is your own and there is a beat to it that just comes together...it fits so well that it reels you in...awesome work
duff |
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