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Pierced
Contributed by
maylaur
on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 09:43:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Wasteland of my heart
Unwavering string held taut
Empty. Yearning. Lost.
Copyright ©
maylaur
... [
2011-11-07 09:43:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Pierced
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 09:55:53 AM AEST (User
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WOW! This is an awesome haiku...
The wasteland keeps it a toe in the nature mode. Love!
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Re: Pierced
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Friday, 11th November 2011 @ 12:12:31 AM AEST (User
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Not bad. A bit short for my taste :p but beautiful nonetheless. |
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