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happy newyear
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 09:35:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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pieces of snippets
bay at the moon
midnight's pillow
a backward glance
reciting twisted
snaps of not
for tight crevices
and dead leaves
new November grey
skies and crickets
trapped snow waiting
crawling down to roll
past love to carry
words of everything
pushed off bent
flutters a black shade
flapping till folded
soft dark petal
picked last lost
bruised decaying
don't take
them up
till death settles
December cold.
Copyright ©
ming
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2011-11-07 09:35:19]
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Re: happy newyear
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 02:12:24 PM AEST
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| 'happy newyear' presents us with a cold picture; it is thus out of which comes the call for warmth and celebration -- so as to give us shield from the endless winter. yet -- with a bit of foresight -- we can see that before long the ice will melt and new chirps will decorate the softened sky. A strikingly original poem. Very. Beautiful. --David |
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Re: happy newyear
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by duff on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 02:30:23 PM AEST
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What a gorgeous write my friend...your descriptions are stunning and it really is a piece of art...it's always a pleasure to read your work...captivating stuff
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