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Unforgivable

Contributed by banda5k1 on Sunday, 6th November 2011 @ 07:42:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I screamed at the top of my lungs but no one heard me.
Why would you do this to me?
After everything I’ve ever done for you.
You stole my heart and broke it in pieces.
You raped me.
The bleeding still hasn’t stopped.
Why o why didn’t I pick up the warning signals?
The way you looked at me, I knew something was amiss.
But I just… I just found you so charming, in a very strange way
And I trusted you like I’ve trusted no one else before
But you broke that trust into a thousand shards
And laughed as you look at me,
I can only now see what I couldn’t before.
The evil in your eyes that I was blind to.
You did unspeakable things,
used me in ways I couldn’t before have imagined.
The pain I’m feeling now no one should have to bare.
I tried to kill myself two days ago,
I took the whole bottle of sleeping pills
But woke up today, and cried.
Cried because I didn’t die.
And the bleeding still hasn’t stopped.
I just wanted to let you know that,
And let you know what you did is unforgivable,
And I’ll be glad to see you burn in hell.




Copyright © banda5k1 ... [ 2011-11-06 19:42:34]
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Re: Unforgivable (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th November 2011 @ 07:48:31 PM AEST
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A tragedy written in a beautiful way not many can do...but you succeeded.
If this is about you I am so sorry.

Embrace Imperfection,
Alex


Re: Unforgivable (User Rating: 1 )
by Banda5k1 on Sunday, 6th November 2011 @ 07:49:43 PM AEST
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Na it's just a fabrication of my imagination. Hope you liked it and if so check out some of my other poems! :D


Re: Unforgivable (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 10th November 2011 @ 11:33:39 AM AEST
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I feel the pain in this flow
well done




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