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Trying to Write
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 5th November 2011 @ 09:01:42 PM in AEST
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Thinking too hard,
Nothing comes to mind,
Waiting for a perfect line…
Words slowly words begin to appear
Like the steam on a bathroom mirror.
Vapors form in my mind
Idea clouds inspire me to rhyme.
Finally, I get the words on paper
Slowly the vapors fade away.
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lesoleilnoire
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2011-11-05 21:01:42]
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Re: Trying to Write
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by ming on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 09:14:20 AM AEST
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Nice! Love the 'vapor' line. It popped for me...
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Re: Trying to Write
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 02:29:49 PM AEST
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'Trying to Write' is a special poem to which I think most of us can relate. "The steam on the bathroom mirror" is a familiar face; it diffuses before we can quite write it... yet here is the paradox. The steam, despite it's wont, is taken. And here the steam becomes stream -- ever to flow from pen to paper. Vapor, here, seems Victory. Great poem. Clear. Visit. --David
Contributed by lesoleilnoire on Saturday, November 05 2011 @ 21:01:42 AEST
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