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Don't Turn out the Light
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
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Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
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I see faces everywhere
With voices all their own
Speaking in my ear
Of things they shouldn’t know.
They grow out of the shadows
Disappear with a ray of light
But leave a cold message in my ear
We’ll be back tomorrow night
No one else knows them
Their message is just for me
With a spine-chilling shriek
And a hair-raising laugh
That in my mind just will not cease
Blood is their aura
They have knives for finger nails
And those knives on a chalkboard
Remind me of their wail
They feed on my weaknesses
They know every fear and secret, new and old
They suck out my sanity if I cower
Yet I die if I am bold.
So as I stand before you
I beg you one last time
Standing before God I ask you
Don’t turn out the light
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Re: Don't Turn out the Light
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:14:32 PM AEST
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| beautiful peice |
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Re: Don't Turn out the Light
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by exiled on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 03:47:33 PM AEST
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very good ecspecially the last verse. who is so close to you that makes you feel this way?
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Re: Don't Turn out the Light
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 03:48:35 PM AEST
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i love this..
especially like:
They grow out of the shadows
Disappear with a ray of light
x_x_x
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Re: Don't Turn out the Light
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:45:15 PM AEST
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| totally awesome... dunno if this is what you meant but; i think it is psychic vampryes your describing:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Don't Turn out the Light
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:32:55 AM AEST
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| i didn't know that i bothered you that much sis! haha..j/k...great write. i know how you feel. well of course i do...we're twins! sheesh. Love you much! keep writing...never stop! |
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