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The feral throat
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Saturday, 5th November 2011 @ 08:02:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Open autumn
The feral throat
Of pain
To shriek
New found
Fear
Facing
Sterile light
Life
Torn from
Life
Timeworn
And exhausted
To breathe
New breath
You, stumbling bay of love
Your name begins
A sudden
Blustering day
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iodinelove
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2011-11-05 20:02:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The feral throat
(User Rating: 1 ) by RickRoss on
Saturday, 5th November 2011 @ 11:46:00 PM AEST (User
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I feel like this poem is about depression. "Time worn" taking life from life... why is this autumn so hard for you? |
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Re: The feral throat
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 10:01:12 AM AEST (User
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And he knocks it out of the park! This rocks!
My favorite line...
"Open autumn
The feral throat
Of pain
To shriek"
I feel this in all its intensity!
ming |
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