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Eulogy of Bodily Disdain
Contributed by
Mosier
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Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A face of incandescence and a paper doll-smile
You waited until I bowed my head
Oblivious as you unveiled a mouth of razor-sharp glory
I picture you with sunken eyes
Wrist dampened bandages
As I speak my throat falls to my stomach
As I speak my mouth is lodged with a relic of this embodiment
You look different from below
Gape at you through shattered eyes
The sight of a million angels has rendered me immaterial
And the smell of April dusk has burned away your sweet stale perfumes
The rotting remnants of your flesh I've kept too dear underneath blackened fingernails
With these bolts in my back I'm unhygienic and polluted with love
Molded of filth and hardened to a statue of agony
Placed hung wrist as your public spectacle
An admonished reminder to those who stake their heart for the game of love
Meaninglessly ripped away
As I weep into an evasive blackness my silence becomes my only reward
The thickening crust of blood and tears in my throat becomes the only solace
I gave the light from my eyes with a hand on your face ..
Copyright ©
Mosier
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2003-05-01 13:05:00]
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Re: Eulogy of Bodily Disdain
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:17:57 PM AEST
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| this is awesome.. keep it up, keep postin.. ur talented 4 sure! |
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Re: Eulogy of Bodily Disdain
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by exiled on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 03:53:02 PM AEST
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Very good write, a lot like my stuff. oh by the way im only 18 it's hard to get noticed here but if thats what you want just hang in there.
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Re: Eulogy of Bodily Disdain
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 04:07:00 PM AEST
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Wow I loved the dark imagery in this masterpiece. It was beautiful in its own morbid way. Loved it all hope to see more from you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Eulogy of Bodily Disdain
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 04:10:40 PM AEST
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Welocme to ypdc.Awesom write.
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Re: Eulogy of Bodily Disdain
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 05:03:51 PM AEST
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| this is amazing...by the way i'm only 14 so you know lol...but this is amazing... |
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Re: Eulogy of Bodily Disdain
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 01:52:53 PM AEST
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| excellent dark write:) welcome to ypdc, hugs nessa |
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Re: Eulogy of Bodily Disdain
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by Apartment213 on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 09:14:01 PM AEST
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| hey man this was just great one of my FAVORITE poems on the whole site. check out some of my stuff if u like tell me what u think...i look forward to reading A LOT more stuff from urs. |
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