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THE DAY THAT I MET YOU!
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 08:08:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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That Day Will Be Forever,
Tattooed To The Fabric Of My Mind
As The Day True Love Became
A Virtual Reality For Me To Find!
The Needlework That Was Woven
With The Skill Of A Masters Hand.
Gave No Knowledge At All To Us,
That It Was Part Of A Master Plan!
We Met At A Special Theatre
Used For Movies And Also Plays.
Without Understanding The Mystery
Of Our Compatible DNA’s!
What Happened Was Just Like Magic,
Like A Conductors Musical Wand!
The Seeds Were Planted And Watered,
Two Strangers Would Now Form A Bond!
What Else Had Happened To Me That Day?
Whatever Else Did I Do?
I Remember It Not, But My Mind Parchment Jots,
It As The Day That I First Met You!
Copyright ©
robert_edgar_burns
... [
2011-11-04 20:08:13]
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Re: THE DAY THAT I MET YOU!
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 09:20:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful, bro.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: THE DAY THAT I MET YOU!
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 5th November 2011 @ 08:41:58 AM AEST
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yes
I like the way this flows
and
I love the subject,
well done. |
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Re: THE DAY THAT I MET YOU!
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by AdamH on
Tuesday, 15th November 2011 @ 06:59:52 AM AEST
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| I like this. I like it a lot. It has a good structure and the flow of the words is pleasant. |
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