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When I left that morning
Contributed by
pat346
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2011 @ 08:01:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You were a little high
I was a little buzzed
off your mothers rum
and I met your buds
We drove around
to their favorite spot
where we flirted while
they smoked some pot
it was getting late
you were touching me
i was touching you
in the backseat
I had work at six
so we made it known
said "to go to bed"
but "just to be alone"
you played to me
your favorite songs
my hair would raise
when you sung along
we rolled around
and lost our clothes
We lost ourselves
finally alone
When I woke
I brushed your hair
behind your ear and
held it there
I smiled at you
because you were mine
you opened your eyes
and on cloud nine
I said I'm off to work
I'll see you soon
It was hard as hell
to leave that room
So If you ask me
when I knew,
when I left that morning
I was in love with you.
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pat346
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2011-11-02 20:01:49]
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Re: When I left that morning
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2011 @ 09:13:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: When I left that morning
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 12:54:39 PM AEST
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awww... so sweet and beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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