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Miscarriage
Contributed by
spencer1607
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Wednesday, 2nd November 2011 @ 06:52:49 PM in AEST
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I hope and pray that this is not reality
So you might know the love you made
Inside a heart so cold and decayed
To breathe in life, to know my face
My title stripped away from me
On my darkest day in history
Your life was swiftly taken away
Inside your grave's a piece of me
Oh, I would give up everything
To hear your voice, to see your face
To hear your heart, feel it beating
Inside your grave's a piece of me.
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spencer1607
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2011-11-02 18:52:49]
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Re: Miscarriage
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2011 @ 09:30:13 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your lose.
I lost twins way back when.
huggs, blesings, healing,
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Re: Miscarriage
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by mvvenkataraman on
Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 01:22:52 AM AEST
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Dear respected spencer1607,
True. A mother carries for ten months
She suffers the burden very joyfully
Hoping to see the new arrival eagerly
In case it dies, loss is irreparable
You have very beautifully weaved
This sad emotion finely poetically
You deserve approbation fairly
If this loss is personal, I am sorry.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
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Re: Miscarriage
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by KeyVerse on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 05:13:48 PM AEST
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I am so sorry for your loss...
Your words portray a heart that has known, and will never forget, true and deep love.
With respect,
Donna.
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