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why me? why now?
Contributed by
hoffman123
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Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 03:14:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i act normal on the outside
but i'm deteriorating on the inside
my heart is shattered
my lungs are compressed
breathing gets harder
loving gets colder
"Your hopeless Troy"
"Theres no one for you"
some friend you are
this may be the end
hoping is failing
the train is derailing
where will i crash and burn?
when will my life take a drastic turn?
when will i be happy?
i wonder why me?
Why now?
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2011-11-01 15:14:20]
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Re: why me? why now?
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by AaroKeith on
Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 04:40:59 PM AEST
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| Very dark, but good poetry I wish you happiness |
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Re: why me? why now?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 06:07:56 PM AEST
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It is sad but good writing.
I know it's hard to do but try really hard to think positive and before you know it things will change.
blessings, prayer,
emy |
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Re: why me? why now?
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by kcrysten on
Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 08:29:11 PM AEST
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| It's a wonderful poem. I can feel the words, as if all hope is gone, but your holding on even to the hopeless |
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