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If I Died Today
Contributed by
AaroKeith
on
Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 06:10:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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If I died today
Would you weep for me
Or would you say
'tis a shame
and walk away
As my spirit weeps in darkness
If I died today
Would you remember me
Or would I be gray?
No different from the rest
While my soul is slowly withering
If I died today
Would I really care?
Take me away
Is what I say
As my finger sets on the trigger
Copyright ©
AaroKeith
... [
2011-10-31 18:10:09]
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Re: If I Died Today
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 07:31:07 PM AEST
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This is very sad but it's written well.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: If I Died Today
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by kcrysten on
Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 08:55:49 AM AEST
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| Reminds me of a story/poem I read of someone who was admired, looked up to, confident etc. From the outside, he had the perfect life. But the last sentence of the poem stated his suicide. I liked it, very nice poem |
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