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the kiss
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
on
Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 02:47:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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his mouth was dry with anxiety
she shook her head
and her hips
he tasted his sour breath
as he met her lips
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2011-10-31 14:47:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by FlintHunter on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2011 @ 01:32:56 PM AEST (User
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'the kiss' is a fine poem that speaks of REAL life. I like it very much and appreciate your artistry and honesty. Thanks for posting. -- David |
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Re: the kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by lee6787 on
Saturday, 26th May 2012 @ 08:05:08 PM AEST (User
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very nice, its simple and it speaks to everyone who reads it a really good and truthful poem |
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