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Imprisoned
Contributed by
pep
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Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 03:31:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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No one understands
The extent of this suffering
That between gritted teeth I face every day
With an inner self which is bluffing
And shouts at me to let it away
I smother it like you would a fire
That’s destroying all that’s left
As my soul searches for answers
But there is nothing I can say
Theses daemons that never existed
Have come to take it away
And the inner peace I once dreamed of
Is now a dead body in decay.
Copyright ©
pep
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2011-10-31 03:31:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Imprisoned
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 04:26:52 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC.
Very sad but great writing.
Just keep writing, that helps.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Imprisoned
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoetToLearn on
Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 03:08:11 PM AEST (User
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This is a great, sad, poem. I would say I understand how you feel, but I know that when I'm sad I hate it when people say they understand.
So. Great poetry, sad reason, beautiful rythym. |
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Re: Imprisoned
(User Rating: 1 ) by PoetToLearn on
Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 03:08:45 PM AEST (User
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And plus. One of the lines is "Noone understands" |
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Re: Imprisoned
(User Rating: 1 ) by pep on
Friday, 4th November 2011 @ 03:16:25 AM AEST (User
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Why Is it "Noone" I don't get it... |
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