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Forget
Contributed by
Damian
on
Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 01:03:02 AM in AEST
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They all say I'd be better to forget,
But it's what I saw that they don't get
I still see the bright red flash
I still hear the thick, cold splash
They say everything happens for a reason,
Everything blooms in it's season
But how do I open to the world
This secret makes my petrels stay furled
The crash, the flash of red
Hanging lost, above the bed
Your face I see as you turn to me
Your silent scream brings to knee
Why leave me alone in this world of depression,
They all smile till i make the confession
They killed her cold, day by day
Until she had no choice
The noose was tight,
The rope bound
To world of purity, to the light
Maybe then they will not going
The crash, the flash of red
Hanging lost, above the bed
Your face I see as you turn to me
Your silent scream brings to knee
And though they all say to forget
They have not seen and do not get
Those sunken eyes, hollow and black
The forced grin of your final, deathly leer
They say you only live once
You took that away
You swung to a tune no one could play
And left me alone in the darkness to pay
I close my eyes, but sleep never comes,
Just that picture of you slung in blood
Sunken, cold, dead to the world
No not the world, just only me
Now the darkness comes to greet
Under he comes for me to meet
Through his darkness there Is light
And all that is there is what you want
I write the note
I set the rope, as darkness turns to friend
My conscience does stop to gloat
But my love, this is my end.
Copyright ©
Damian
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2011-10-31 01:03:02]
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Re: Forget
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by steppingstones on
Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 03:05:40 AM AEST
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| This is beautifully written, it explains the hardship of suicide and how not only does it effect the victim but those around who truly love. Great job :D |
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Re: Forget
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st October 2011 @ 04:18:59 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Awesome writing.
I can only imagine the painful memories you have from the memory.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Forget
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by AaroKeith on
Tuesday, 1st November 2011 @ 08:16:39 PM AEST
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| Sad topic, but you write very well. I am very impressed you should try to get something published |
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Re: Forget
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by rmg on
Monday, 14th November 2011 @ 12:49:59 PM AEST
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| well done; important! |
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Re: Forget
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by LittleMissAnonymous on
Wednesday, 16th November 2011 @ 05:54:49 PM AEST
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| you had great imagery, i could picture the speaker mourning. you are a great poet |
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Re: Forget
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by BritVent on
Thursday, 29th December 2011 @ 01:46:56 PM AEST
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| You are an amazing writer. Whoever reads what you write actually feels what you felt. I like that. Keep it up okay. |
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