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Tunneled by the sea.
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Friday, 28th October 2011 @ 11:19:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Standing still
I am tarmac and blue
Ineffable eyes
Finding for the first time
The end of love
Sitting at the memory
Of childhood thoughts
The sun across black
Uncertain fields
The terror of a depression
Tunneled by the sea
As a child
I would sit on a stone wall
And dream
The sun would set itself
In two
Identical shells
Until my father whistled
Then I would go home
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iodinelove
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2011-10-28 23:19:20]
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Re: Tunneled by the sea.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th October 2011 @ 01:37:03 PM AEST
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Very good write. I luv it when you play and it's awesome to see you posting again.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: Tunneled by the sea.
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by duff on
Tuesday, 8th November 2011 @ 05:58:14 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written and there is so much more beneath the surface...Something as beautiful and tranquil as the ocean taking you somewhere no one else can take you...This was a pleasure to read
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