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Loved once, Love Lost.
Contributed by
cheygal10
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Friday, 28th October 2011 @ 09:19:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hoping for the day to be true
hoping for it to just be me and you
Can't we just be happy
can't things just go my way
I missed you so much
But will it last this time
You were my first love
you were my first heart break
You did it once.
can I trust you again
I want to
but can I?
Copyright ©
cheygal10
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2011-10-28 21:19:28]
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Re: Loved once, Love Lost.
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 28th October 2011 @ 11:32:11 PM AEST
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What type of input do you want?
I would say the best thing to do is really search yourself and write that. If it's superficial, the reader will know. Go with a natural rhythm. Don't bound yourself by rhymes (unless your challenging yourself, or are going for a very particular tone).
We all have our own voice, and our own music. Utilize yours. Don't hide behind rules. Just open yourself completely. The worst that can happen is that you'll be crushed, and that's a quick, painless end ^_^ |
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Re: Loved once, Love Lost.
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 29th October 2011 @ 01:30:13 AM AEST
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Hi. I'm not that good but if you want input?
I'd take each line and build a vers around it, I'm just one of those people that likes to elabirate but its very good I get what your saying and I feel your pain. God bless
Greatings
Russell |
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