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Arana Perdida
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Friday, 28th October 2011 @ 02:53:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A gentle breeze... a tragic song,
such fragile beauty...crushed and gone,
and when I look... into the past,
All I hear... your perfect laugh...
It floats upon... a gentle breeze,
and for a moment... time does freeze...
and in this space... of frozen time,
you will forever... still be mine.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2011-10-28 02:53:09]
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Re: Arana Perdida
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th October 2011 @ 03:15:56 PM AEST
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Captivating and full of thoughts.
The fact that you haven't overplayed it with too many words makes it all the more enchanting.
Lovely write
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Re: Arana Perdida
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 28th October 2011 @ 11:37:23 PM AEST
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i hate spiders.
nice poem, but still... |
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Re: Arana Perdida
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by duff on
Tuesday, 8th November 2011 @ 06:18:01 AM AEST
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Delicate words that boast of compassion and sincerity...gentle and well spoken with emotional delivery that I always find in your work... very well done
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