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reflections
Contributed by
pollyamik
on
Thursday, 27th October 2011 @ 03:20:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In my dreams i see your face.
Behind the mirror your trapped there.
Shattered glass in hand and at your feet.
Screaming for me to let you out.
As we set our hands on either side of the glass.
I whisper 'i cant let you out..'
You close your eyes and the reflection turns to me.
I look into my eyes and hit the glass 'WHY!'
As the glass shatters to my feet.
A tear rolls down my cheek..
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2011-10-27 15:20:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: reflections
(User Rating: 1 ) by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 29th October 2011 @ 06:38:41 AM AEST (User
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'reflections' is a terrific poem that speaks about a subject to which everyone can relate. Who doesn't know there's another -- somehow better -- one inside? But who can speak it so eloquently as do you in this poem? The poem is finished -- the cadence is perfect. Perhaps the process described by the poem in NEVER finished -- for all I know; and maybe it's that which makes you think the poem's unfinished. To me it's wonderfully finished. Majestically. Delicately. Sweetly. -- FllintHunter
Contributed by pollyamik on Thursday, October 27 2011 @ 15:20:02 AEST
Topic: Emotional Poetry |
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