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sparkle
Contributed by
elle
on
Wednesday, 26th October 2011 @ 07:01:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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the vagueness
that accompanies death
is the same vagueness
that proceeds birth
each evolving
into a chance
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2011-10-26 07:01:05]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: sparkle
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by PreciousKitten on
Wednesday, 26th October 2011 @ 07:25:19 AM AEST
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| Simple yet made it point. i love it. i enjoyed your poem elle. please keep writing. thanks |
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Re: sparkle
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th October 2011 @ 03:43:42 PM AEST
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Quality all tied up in a neat little package of words.
What more can I say ?
Steve |
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Re: sparkle
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by ming on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2011 @ 10:06:52 PM AEST
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no truer words...
'evolving
into a chance'
Love this.
ming
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Re: sparkle
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by FlintHunter on
Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 07:26:10 AM AEST
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'sparkle' is an outsanding poem. It makes its point in six short and poignant lines. It is well-crafted and extremely interesting. Its message is both mysterious and understandable. Great song. Love it! --David aka FH
Contributed by elle on Wednesday, October 26 2011 @ 07:01:05 AEST
Topic: Life Poetry
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