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Little lie!
Contributed by
cheygal10
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Tuesday, 25th October 2011 @ 06:06:13 PM in AEST
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all that we have is this little lie,
a little lie that keeps growing,
i dont no if i can handle the pain anymore,
like a wilted flower to water,
its eating at my soul,
i want this lie to just go away forever,
the sourst of what started my pain,
is what i have to get rid of ,
im sry to say it,
but its only the truth,
your my little lie!
so you need to die!
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cheygal10
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2011-10-25 18:06:13]
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Re: Little lie!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th October 2011 @ 10:16:48 PM AEST
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Great writing especially at the age of 6 or 7.
Blessings,
emy
There's nothing in this write to make any one laff. |
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Re: Little lie!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th October 2011 @ 04:09:16 PM AEST
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| excellent poem for a 6 year old!! i tried to write poems when i was 8 - i couldn't even get to the 3rd sentence! it's even a good poem for an adult to write. |
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