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In search of...
Contributed by
razorbladerose
on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I go where the lonely and searching travel,
and I swear I saw you there once or twice.
Where midnight is silent and passions run
deep, you were holding my lifeless body in
your arms.
Through the window in my wall, I
saw you fly across the sky.
You found something that once belonged to me; you gave
me back the wing I had lost so long ago.
Beyond the protective purple shadows, I was
sleeping in a sweetly scented valley.
We were both in the dark woods of solitude,
when I suddenly smelt a scent of heaven, and
realized that it was you all along.
Copyright © Jeannie T. 2003
Copyright ©
razorbladerose
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2003-05-01 02:05:00]
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Re: In search of...
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:25:44 AM AEST
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very good write
Shari |
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Re: In search of...
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by WordPoet on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 02:20:09 PM AEST
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I must admit, though I find your poems descriptive and interesting, I am often at a loss as to what exactly they mean. My own shortcoming perhaps but no less an enjoyable read in any case.
Nice write. |
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Re: In search of...
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by exiled on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 09:30:54 AM AEST
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Nice write Razor;p. Keep em coming.
exiled |
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Re: In search of...
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by venkat on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 02:16:26 AM AEST
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| hey.. jeannie, this is wonderful, you directly went to heaven..and smelt its fragrance also ,wow, very nice girl..venkat |
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Re: In search of...
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by PhoenixPM on
Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 10:12:34 PM AEST
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| Such beautiful images you've painted with letters. |
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