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My Word
Contributed by
sanders
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Tuesday, 25th October 2011 @ 09:58:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I keep on asking to myself
What pleasure abandonment gave
To stop speaking for myself
And listen to all what others had to say.
I keep on asking to myself
When was the last time I preferred to choose
To stand up for all that I thought was good
And stop thinking about what would happen,
only if I could.
I keep on asking to myself
How much more do I have to feel
To convince myself that I really need
And start fulfilling all that I once had wished.
I keep on finding a chance to say
I also have the right to express, if I may
But alas that day is yet to come
When my feelings shall also matter to some.
Copyright ©
sanders
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2011-10-25 09:58:22]
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Re: My Word
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 25th October 2011 @ 10:17:37 AM AEST
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Hello I'm Russell from South Africa.
We have a word here ( BLIKSIM) its an exclamation word. And thats what I have to say about your poem.
BLIKSIM that is so good.
God bless and be strong wish I could.
Greetings
Russell |
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Re: My Word
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 02:36:47 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed and penned, you have a true poet's soul,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My Word
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 12:54:02 PM AEST
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I like how you wrote this. Some of it worded almost feeble in nature, like a baby, then you seem to answer yourself with a challenge...A call to action perhaps.
If your feelings matter to you, then let them out. Often.
We must also listen to be heard though. ;)
~Scorp
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