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Are you the lie?
Contributed by
cheygal10
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Sunday, 23rd October 2011 @ 07:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I thought you were my everything,
I thought you would be there for me,
I thought you would be my one and only,
I thought I would love you forever,
I thought you were my prince,
but I guess I was wrong
why is it what everything I thought about you
was just a lie?
are you the lie
or am I?
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cheygal10
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2011-10-23 19:10:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Are you the lie?
(User Rating: 1 ) by xanvier on
Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 03:59:30 AM AEST (User
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i like your poetry, it is just plain and simple but it's very striking and straight to the point... nice and beautiful poetry... |
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Re: Are you the lie?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th October 2011 @ 04:21:18 PM AEST (User
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excellent poem for a 6 year old! and for an adult! you have talent. |
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