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Still Waiting
Contributed by
silent-cry
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Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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night after day i wait for you
i miss you...do you miss me too?
you said you will be back soon,that you won't be gone for too long
you asked me not to cry,to be patient,to be strong
you promised you won't be gone for too long,said you will be back soon
and i am still waiting for you, and i ask the shining moon
if it can see you ,if it knows where you are
on what ground you are sleeping, under the eye of what star?
who knows if you are still alive;maybe you are already dead
and nothing is left of you,but your beautiful image in my head
maybe you kept your promise,you're coming back,you're on your way
and the thought of soon hugging you again has got what it takes to make my day...
still waiting.
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2003-05-01 00:45:00]
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Re: Still Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:08:27 AM AEST
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This is so sad and yet it ends of a beautifully hopeful note. I hope you find him again soon.
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Re: Still Waiting
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:33:41 PM AEST
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ah, this is so beautiful, a lovely poem. Good luck, hope you find Alan soon..
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Re: Still Waiting
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 12:26:17 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, so filled with sadness but also hope. I hope you find what your waiting for... |
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