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To feel, from steel.
Contributed by
KhorniteHound
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Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 03:15:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You asked me what i truly meant,
When i said i loved you,
In that small , cramped and cold tent,
What i truly mean is i care for you, more then all the others could do,
When i look upon her eyes, i feel my heart burning,
I thought I'd go insane,
Thanks to love yearning,
Those flickers of love and sanity remain,
To me, your a gorgeous flower in bloom,
Ive felt like this for quite a while,
Breaking through my gloom,
I love you for your eyes, your voice, your smile.
Your love i yearn to find,
Ive never felt like this,
Even in the depths of my mind,
I think of your kiss,
Why does the sight of you fill me with such pleasure,
You turned me from the steel.
Like a spotlight that shines on a glorious treasure?
Into the love, that i now feel.
Copyright ©
KhorniteHound
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2011-10-21 15:15:32]
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Re: To feel, from steel.
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by JonnyCapone on
Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 04:20:03 PM AEST
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| Be wary. it matters not how how she is now, she will turn and you will fall. be wary. |
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Re: To feel, from steel.
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by emystar on
Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 05:16:16 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Really sweet write.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: To feel, from steel.
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by AmberAmethyst on
Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 06:00:13 PM AEST
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| awww i love it. and ima girl and there are some that will turn on you but it depends on a girls needs and how u meet those needs. alot of girls are really nice people. but u might have 'the 1' for you. |
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