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Post-Battle Syndrome
Contributed by
Splatteredaisy
on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A shreaded beat stands obscurely,
Slash upon slash
Webs of knots dangle
in the pulses of breath
swaying off-beat
Sizzled blood diffuses
into trembled nerves...
Stinging palms of feet
spread themselves with quick
releif...
Pores open, in thirst, from throbing
tension...
Racing moments sifting in time
To an eye slowly unveiling.
Copyright ©
Splatteredaisy
... [
2003-04-30 23:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Post-Battle Syndrome
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by norm on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 03:45:06 PM AEST
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| It's beautifully written.. |
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Re: Post-Battle Syndrome
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by CarrieLynn on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 04:36:34 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem because I wrote one with the same meaning I think. about a soldier preparing for war and how his thoughts and sounds are in america not where he is. so I really like yours. |
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