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Lightning
Contributed by
Mikki
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Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 10:55:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The rain is the tears and the wind is the breath
The thunder's a cry for some help before death
The lighting's the light that we can't seem to catch
The clouds are the dreams we've forgotten and left
The moon's a reminder of all that you were
You're stunning bright glow through the dark, empty blur
The ocean's the feeling inside of my mind
To my deep emotion, they often are blind.
The sunlight has faded from darkness to dust
The faces surrounding me weaken my trust
This whole in my heart has been filled with disgust
To this living nightmare, I cannot adjust.
I'm drowning in sorrow, I'm drowning in blood
The monstrous disasters have started to flood
I need you here now, but you've fallen asleep
Your final strong breath caused my heart to grow weak
The rain is the tears and the wind is your voice
The thunder's my cry for the strength to rejoice
The lightning's the light that can't shine very bright
And all of these memories killed me tonight...
Copyright ©
Mikki
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2011-10-20 10:55:27]
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Re: Lightning
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by xanvier on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 11:43:56 AM AEST
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| very deep emotions about someone's death that are very dear to us, i know the feeling when someone's death still lingers in our minds' the dreams, the hope, and the love that he/she had left us is emotional... nice and beautiful poetry... |
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Re: Lightning
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by emystar on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 03:34:53 PM AEST
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breath taking write here that we all can relate.
Great write.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lightning
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 05:16:46 PM AEST
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May you find peace in this Biblical
Admonition, "Weeping may endure
for a night, but Joy cometh in the
morning!" This is how you can find
the "Peace that passes all understanding!"
Blessings,
Robert Edgar Burns |
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Re: Lightning
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by cathartic on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 09:13:09 PM AEST
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two words.
vividly eclectic. |
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