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You Blow My Mind
Contributed by
RussellReinhardt
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 02:08:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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01:09:2011....
You glided like an angel down the stairs.
You looked so graceful and fair.
I look into your beautiful green eyes.
I was most presently surprised.
Your beautiful long black flowing hair.
My God all I could do was stair.
I was stunned flabbergasted.
For beauty you have mastered.
Are you truly mine?
This woman of beauty that is so divine.
Damn woman you blow my mind!....
RR
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2011-10-19 14:08:30]
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Re: You Blow My Mind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 08:08:20 PM AEST
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| beautiful! i know exactly how you feel. your heart and soul is in this poem. you have a way with words. |
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Re: You Blow My Mind
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by cathartic on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 08:16:44 PM AEST
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| i think your wife (or lonely women such as the one below this comment) is the only one who can truly appreaciate this. please stick to chocolates and jewllery for whooing the wife. (: |
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Re: You Blow My Mind
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 04:14:59 AM AEST
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| lol someone is lonely and trolling. Not mentioning any names... anyway, I thought this piece was fine, and I bet your wife would love it. it was good imagery. I could see your wife's dark hair :P |
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