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rattle the dark
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 10:10:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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merged
and
folding
over
events
a plethora
of images
and ideas
rolling
out black
and LOUD
shaking
loose
fingernail
scrapes
of lessons
learned
late late
never is
an illusion
of depth.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-10-19 10:10:20]
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Re: rattle the dark
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by ammar on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 10:50:01 AM AEST
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Very true. Time is cruel that way. However, it tends to test you time and again, so the lesson learned once can come in handy for the next test.
The structuring of this poem is unique and very appropriate to the subject matter. A fine write!
Peace
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Re: rattle the dark
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by elle on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 04:36:30 PM AEST
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Hi ming,
I love this your spin on this poem & I love love love the ending. There are so
many illusions in life, sometimes that even extends to the tests & lessons.
Peace my dear. . . elle |
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